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Do you feel your life is taking place on center stage or beneath the bleachers? Which do you prefer? 


Book Review on Doctor Sleep, sequel to The Shining.

Book Review of Stephen King’s Doctor Sleep. Scribner, 2013.dr sleep   10

If you’re an avid reader like myself, you undoubtedly have that handful of characters that never stray far from your heart or mind. Many of these characters are ones that have been with us for a long time, through entire series of books; others left their impression through a single story. In Doctor Sleep, King explores new territory by taking a well-loved character from 35+ years ago (1977) and reintroducing him as an adult, as if all that time really did pass.

**Before you continue on, I recommend reading my book review of The Shining, the 35-year-old prequel to Doctor Sleep.


Doctor Sleep reintroduces readers to Danny/Dan Torrance. Danny is the 5-year-old boy from The Shining who was haunted by his own paranormal/psychic abilities in the winter of 1977 when his father took on the job as winter caretaker of a historic (and haunted) hotel. Dan is a single, recovering alcoholic in his 40s who sweeps his supernatural gifts under the rug, only using them to help people pass on in the hospice where he works. That is, until he meets Abra Stone. When Abra, a girl in her young teens, hits a complicated, scary situation, she reaches out to Dan using her own supernatural abilities and discover their abilities are stronger when together then they ever could be alone.

When a pack of immortal murders senses Abra as a threat, they make it their goal to track her down, suck all the “Shining” out of her and, once she is good for nothing else, kill her. As the danger increases, so does the bond between Abra and Dan, creating a war between good and evil where neither side is willing to back down.

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Like always, King has excellent characters. They are diverse and round with identifying features. They are true to their personality traits that are introduced from the start, and in this case, true to their history and family attributes as well.

To come back to a character that was so deeply loved and remembered had to be a daunting task. As King re-acquaints us with Danny Torrance, he runs the risk of disappointing the reader who thought they knew what was in store for him so many years ago.

Another risk with returning to the well-loved Danny Torrance 35+ years later is that he wouldn’t feel like the same character; he would just feel like a grown man with similar abilities to the young Danny. King does two things very well to avoid this: 1) He shows the reader short scenes of Danny growing up and becoming the man that he currently is. 2) Dan stays very true to his roots and to his family. By putting traits of Jack Torrance (Danny’s father in The Shining) in the adult Dan, King allows the reader to connect to that part of the Torrance family that they already knew. It’s no secret that many of us grow up to become our parents. :P


The Shining the movie has been said to be one of the best films ever made, even though King didn't approve of many of the changes.

The Shining the movie has been said to be one of the best films ever made, even though King didn’t approve of many of the changes.

The novel has a typical structure where the reader is introduced to a few characters that seem to be unrelated but eventually, slowly, their paths collide. Keeping each character’s storyline interesting while slowing weaving them together creates a lot of anticipation and excitement for the climax of the story.

King tackles the large time gap between The Shining’s 5-year-old Danny Torrance to the 40-year-old Dan by showng the reader short scenes from his life between now and then. King shows only the relevant scenes, getting to the present of the story as soon as possible. This transition is a large part of why Dan still feels like the same character as little Danny Torrance.

Overall—4 stars

Although the novel was a great story and well written, it didn’t capture my attention like some King novels. Part of that was because there was too many unrelated supernatural things occurring. As I stated in my book review on The Shining, my favorite science fiction is that which is believable. Meaning with only a slight twist in our present world, the story could actually happen. The Shining may be the best example of that closeness to reality that I have ever read. Doctor Sleep, however, strays farther from our modern world. I never doubted the abilities that Dan or Abra uncovered within themselves, but I did doubt the supernatural abilities of the villainous group called the True Knot. As the book went along, this group seemed to have more and more unexplained abilities that would appear too conveniently. This stretched reality too far for my liking and lowered the level of suspense and horror. This could have been easily prevented by explaining near the beginning of the story that each member of the True Know possessed a different type of ability, and explaining a few.

Let me know what you thought about Dan in his 40s. Did he feel like the same character to you?

I’m taking bets: How long before they make a Doctor Sleep movie??


Graham Greene’s Edits of The Power and The Glory *Spoilers*

power-and-glory-greeneShitty first drafts; its a common phrase in the writing world and one that I personally cling on to as one of the main reasons I keep plugging away on my first novel. Editing is where the story really ties itself together. Therefore, the edits an author makes from the first draft of their novel until publication fascinates me!

Unfortunately, with the use of computers and word documents, these changes often disappear into cyber space, never to be seen or studied by anyone. BUT in 1939 when Graham Green wrote the first version of The Power and the Glory, he used good ‘ol pen and paper. That original, hand-written copy of the novel is still in tack (see pictures below!), allowing individuals to compare the original copy with the published manuscript.

See my book review of The Power and the Glory here. It may surprise you!! 

While doing a bit of snooping on the Internet, I came across this intriguing article by François Gallix, a professor of contemporary literature in English at the Sorbonne in Paris. Gallix had the privilege of looking at the original version of The Power and the Glory and in doing so, he found some meaningful cuts made to the text which he describes in his article. Click here for full article.

**Spoilers ahead** The most interesting cut Gallix pointed out is near the end of the novel when the main character, a priest in Mexico during a time when all religion is outlawed, was executed in the center of town. Gallix explains the passage as follows:

The published text runs as follows:

“Then there was a single shot, and opening [his eyes] again he [Mr. Tench] saw the officer stuffing his gun back into his holster and the little man was a routine heap beside the wall—something unimportant that had to be cleared away. [added on the manuscript and published: Two knock-kneed men approached quickly].”

After “cleared away,” Greene crossed out the following lines that were not included in the published version:

“But looking down Mr. Tench caught a look on the officer’s face—an uneasy look, the look of a disappointed man and it suddenly sunk to him, as the buzzards flipped down again after the explosion’s shot, as though the blood had been cleared away from a whole region of the world.”

Gallix explains this cut as part of Greene’s “purified minimalist style,” purposely leaving things open ended so the reader can interpret the work anyway he/she sees fit. Many authors incorporate this minimalist style into their writing, Raymond Carver as one of my favorites, but seeing the actual edits first hand is a unique experience. I’m very glad that I came across this article and have the opportunity to share it with you all! Please check out the entire article here. It’s not long and well worth the time!


Title Page from Graham Greene’s manuscript of The Power and the Glory. © Copyright Verdant SA.


Page from Graham Greene’s manuscript of The Power and the Glory. © Copyright Verdant SA.

Writing Prompt

She was a quaint woman, solid-colored skirts hovering just above the ground. I saw a child approach her once, asking to play a card game. She pulled a deck out of her apron pocket and asked if he’d ever heard of rummy? Well, she said, gather all your coins. A woman as old as I doesn’t waste her time on penniless hands.


Writing Prompt: Write an extremely short, yet vivid, character description. Include at least one specific scene. I was aiming for 50 words in this one and went a little over. No matter your word count, edit your first draft to cut out as much as you possible.

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Review a Classic: The Power and the Glory

The Power and the Glory by Graham Greene. Published in 1940.Image

Originally published in 1940, under the original American title The Labyrinthine Ways, The Power and the Glory has been widely read (by the general public) and researched (by literary academics everywhere).

The ironic title is a doxology from the Christian’s Lord Prayer. The title is ironic because the main character, a priest half-heartedly avoiding capture in a state where religion has been outlawed, has very little power and no glory whatsoever. This priest, who is supposed to represent God’s message on Earth, is an alcoholic, hopeless, desperate, poor man who doesn’t trust anyone. The obvious irony of it makes the title itself a very powerful statement.

The title is not the only thing that has changed throughout the versions. One area of study surrounding the book is the comparisons of different versions of the texts, where certain, impactful lines vary. (I will discuss this more in depth in a future blog!)


**Slight Spoiler** As many plotlines do, this story creates a circle, ending where it began. Without giving away the ending, I will say that minor characters that appear for a short time in the beginning of the novel, appear again in the last few pages, yet nowhere in-between. Also, a very important aspect of the story appears to “start over fresh” in the last few lines, suggesting that perhaps the entire story will occur again to another individual. This type of cycle is a successful plot structure because it creates the sense that the story is eternal and not unique to this individual. 


I don’t particularly like talking about the “themes” of stories because I don’t think every story needs to or should have one. For example, another of Greene’s novels, Our Man in Havana, focuses mainly on entertaining the reader without a clear theme. However, The Power and the Glory has a common thread that can’t be ignored. The downfall of man is present in every step of the novel. First, the novel is set in a time when the government has outlawed all religion, which is a dominant source of hope and happiness for many people. Without religion, one is led to believe that death is the end, that no eternal happiness or “life ever after” follows. Some characters in the novel even state that they believe death on Earth is the end of being.


The story was a bit too political and unclear for my liking. Names were too often averted, characters were always hiding the truth and the drama was written in a very calm tone. These things made the story hard to follow at times, and no clear goal was ever established. Even the priest’s goal of not being caught did not ground the reader because the priest himself seemed it was only a matter of time, he did not fear it, and often walked knowingly into situations that could get him caught and killed. His wishy-washy character made me not care if he got caught. Therefore, I had no real suspense or emotion invested in the story.

Most people would agree that The Power and the Glory is a 5 star novel, but my personal taste has to disagree. I’m giving it 3 stars (and honestly, it would probably be lower if there wasn’t so much outside praise influencing me.) If you’re a literary nut like me it is well worth a read and I hope you enjoy it more than I did! If you simply want to read a fun, emotional, entertaining story, I would suggest you grab Greene’s Our Man in Havana instead. Its an entertaining, funny story that incorporates a unique writing style. 


Previous Book Reviews:

The Shining by Stephen King 

The Storm at the Door by Stefan Merrill Block

Jurassic Park by Michael Crichton

Future Book Reviews:

Doctor Sleep by Stephen King

The Prestige by Christopher Priest


Very Inspiring Blogger Award



Yesterday I was surprised and honored to be nominated for my first blogging award, the Very Inspiring Blogger Award. A big thank you goes out to Matilda at! It always feels good to be recognized!


Here are the rules for this blogger award:

1. Thank and link the amazing person who nominated you.
2. List the rules and display the award.
3. Share seven facts about yourself.
4. Nominate 15 other amazing blogs and comment on their posts to let them know they have been nominated.
5. Optional: Proudly display the award logo on your blog and follow the blogger who nominated you.

Seven facts about me:

1. My favorite deserts are ice cream and cookies. DQ Cookie Dough Blizzard? I’ll never turn it down.

2. I love nature! I recently went on a camping trip to the Grand Canyon and was simply amazed by it!

3. I also love playing ice hockey! I started playing in 2nd grade.

4. I love every season! I love the birth of spring, the outdoor activities of summer, the beauty and crisp feel of fall and I love hockey in the winter time.

5. As a very active child I typically would play sports during recess but I remember one specific day when I was so engrossed by a Goosebumps book that I literally sat on the curb with my nose in the book, ignoring my friends pleas for me to come play with them.

6. I can juggle while walking on stilts.

7. I’m an editor by day and writer by night.

My nomination:

Because I believe that awards should not be given out lightly and because I have not been reading many blogs lately, I only have one nomination. This recently-discovered blog is a gem indeed!

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A King Classic: The Shining Book Review

Book Review of The Shining (1977 throwback!) by Stephen King.  Published by DoubleDay.

ImageMy favorite kind of Science Fiction is the kind you can believe; the kind that would only require a slight twitch of the universe or the opening of a new connection in the human brain. In 1977, Stephen King balanced that believability with true terror in his novel, The Shining. It captured a vast, wide-eyed audience that couldn’t wait to turn the page. The story captured an even larger on-the-edge-of-their-seat audience when the novel was turned into a film in 1980. Why did the story enthrall and terrify such a vast audience? Because the terror is believable.

After reading the Shining less than a year ago, it immediately jumped onto my list of favorites. The writing incorporates a unique style, the story is one of King’s best (not only in my opinion, but consistently considered so by critiques and fans), and there are just enough twists in the world to keep you unaware of what is to come.

Believable Science Fiction

The setting of The Shining is based on a real location, the Stanley Hotel in Estes Park, Colorado. Getting trapped in such a hotel by snow higher than your head may have been a stretch if it was an accident but the Torrance family of the novel chose to stay there for the winter. When the father, Jack Torrance, took on the job as caretaker of the hotel, he and his family agreed to isolate themselves in the hotel for the entire winter.

Danny Torrence, an 8-year-old boy with supernatural powers is the focus of the story. And yes, he does have unrealistic abilities such as mindreading and sending mental messages to a man across the country. But those stretches of reality are balance by smaller, more believable talents. For example, is it so unlikely that an 8-year-old boy has an imaginary friend? Or that he become frightened when a fire hose seems to turn into a snake and chase after him? Is it hard to believe that a man who was once an uncontrollable alcoholic with a quick temper could go a little crazy once being cooped up in an abandoned hotel for months. And, as an avid watcher of Ghost Adventures, I don’t doubt for a moment that most historic hotels are haunted, especially ones that have seen as much violence and death as The Shining’s Overlook Hotel.

There are supernatural happenings in The Shining that do stretch the imagination, but surrounded by a realistic setting with realistic characters, it did not require any sort of leap for me to believe the supernatural. Making a young boy the witness of all these terrifying events also makes them more believable because children are argued to 1) see certain “realities” that adults have long ago pushed into their unconscious and 2) children are more easily frightened, making the scary seem that much more terrifying 

That fictional 8-year-old boy turns into a man!Image

The reason I chose to write a book review on a story I read so long ago was in preparation for the sequel. Doctor Sleep, a 2013 release by King, features the same 8-year-old boy who was tormented by the horrors of the Overlook Hotel. Only now, he is a recovering alcoholic in his 40s who has learned to tame his supernatural powers…until he needs them. My book review on Doctor Sleep will be coming soon! And once again, King does not disappoint.


5 stars! A well-written, entertaining story guaranteed to please, and possibly terrorize. 

A few of the many book covers and images associated with this famous story:


(I do not claim any rights to these photos.)

“16 Twitter Accounts for Word Nerds”

Everyone can use another great account to follow on Twitter! New follows are what keep our timeline fresh and unique to our own interests. That’s why I was excited to come across this list of “16 Twitter Accounts for Word Nerds” by @mental_floss that I couldn’t not share with you! (However sloppy they may be, sometimes double negatives just seem to get my point across better!) 

Know any Twitter accounts you would add to the list?

Check out my Twitter feed at @SarahSchneek

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